This is my first character, and I have no idea what I'm doing, so I'm hoping for some help/critique. I think I might be writing too much in regards to backstory and details, but I don't know. Don't mind the names, I can't name anything right.
I'm kind of new to this too, but I checked Eina out and I genuinely found what i was reading interesting. If you finish this story I would definitely love to read it. All that aside, great job!!
Yayy I love these!! Top down….
So far, it's looking good on the looks page!! You say that she's still human… maybe a nationality? It's just easier for visual purposes, though, so no biggie.
WOW. You've obviously worked very hard on this! Just a tip: if she hates bandits and cultists, but is also a killer, does this lead to a sort of guilt/self-hate? If so, put that down!! It's an awesome quality. Otherwise, everything else seems to be in order.
BIG problem here–no religion? She's in commune with a god, cults have been mentioned multiple times, but NO religion? That seems off to me. Also, I find that filling in the politics section can really help you understand a character! I usually rate mine on a scale of liberal-ness to conservative-ness. That's just me, but it REALLY helps!!
Ooh, poison!! I have a poison-y character too, and they are SO FUN TO WRITE.
YES YES YES YES!! I am ADDICTED to well-developed backstories and this–is–awesome!! You hit pretty much everything. All her mannerisms fit!! Oh, I'm so happy. You just made me happy. This is awesome!!!
Okay, overall? One of the best characters I've reviewed so far!! SO well-developed. I think that filling out some more fields could get you a little more depth, but other than that, AWESOME job!!
I hope that this helps you!! :DDD
Thank you both for the kind words! I'll definitely look into the suggestions you made, cinnamonroll (can't @ because it crashes the browser, oh well) and try to figure out some other little things for her. Thanks so much for the help!