forum My sweet little girl needs a critique

Started December 05, 2019 by @that1_T0ad language

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Heather's a character in my most recent story, and she needs a critique. Could I get one or two?

I'm digging everything about this character except her name. It just doesn't match the badass personality. Heather sounds like a 90s mom with 2.5 kids.

I don’t think I necessarily want to change her name, but thanks :-)