forum Looking for hard critique

Started May 27, 2018 by @Clinquant

tune

So i worked hard on this character and now i need some opinions. Be hard, tell me what you think is missing, i really want her to be complete. Also tell me if something is confusing, idk: Osiria Rosewell

Maybe add a link to the universe, if there is one because a lot of connections in the character description rely on knowing about the world. Also, what does 1'72 mean for the height? Try adding some negative traits to the personality type so she seems more relatable.

Thank you, so there isn't a universe, it's the same world we live in and 1.72 is centimeters, sorry we use a different unit in Germany.

Oh ok. I suggest making a universe because this sounds like a really cool concept and getting your ideas out will make it a lot easier to develop your characters and plot.