forum Lemme know what you think of this character

Started October 07, 2018 by Caboose

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So I'm writing a fanfic of Spider-Man and I was wondering what you guys thought of the ideas I came up with so mostly check out notes and powers. https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/621489/edit

Hi! your character is still on private settings, so we can't crtitique them

fixed it

I like this fan fiction character.
Describe his hair better. "Short and messy" doesn't give much description.
There isn't much to critique. Add to the "nature" category, so we know what his personality is like. :)