forum Judge my OC's

Started October 08, 2020 by @FantasyOCmama15 forum

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First of all, let me just apologize for making so many discussions lol. I find your input incredibly effective and inspirational in my writing development and I thank you all for that!
Anyways, I have a lot of characters, but for now I'm just going to put up my main character and two side characters. Tell me what they lack and or need to keep, or things that you think I should change!
Shiran Ralor Yuso - Shirai
Keson Aben Aymer - Kesshoku
https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/969309# - Elia/Eli

They look cool! I don't really judge characters on individual aspects, more just the vibe they give, and their vibes are strong B)

Thanks @TheMerpyDerpy !