forum Judge my characters based on a couple samples of their RP entries! Please read!

Started April 18, 2018 by Deleted user

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Sam Samudrala

• "Oh my fucking hell," Sam winced. "Haha, it's not as if I need to hear jokes about this all day on how no one would reproduce with whom,"
• This @$$hole bribed me to steal the test answers in biology, Sam wanted to say. And when I got caught, I took the blame. They didn't mention the numerous flirtations and dates that Sam had thought actually meant something. Little did they know, it was all just one big freaking lie. "Nothing you need to know about," they actually said.
• "Haha, very funny," Sam said sarcastically. "Just don't sever any major blood vessels, but you're incompetent enough to even do that,"
• Sam concentrated hard, trying to block out the noise of battle from around them. The tingling began in their heart, spreading to the rest of their body and wracking them with spasms. This transformation was harder than anything else Sam had ever tried, but they were sure they could make it. Just a bit more… They opened their wolfish amber eyes and launched themselves at Mrs. Moon.
• Sam came outside, holding a wallet. They turned around to see Kiera on the steps, nearly tripping over her. "hOLY SH*T, Kiera! There you are!" Then they noticed Kiera's head in her hands. Sam sat down with her. "Hey, you okay?" they asked softly.
• Sam sighed. "I'm sorry, but my honor is at stake. I can't just call off a duel. Can you tell him to meet me at the front of the school?"
• Sam smirked. Although Gnaw was extremely powerful, they had an ace up their sleeve: They had touched Jessica when she was a wolf. Sam had no idea what was going to happen, but they hoped it would be something powerful.

Jessica Moon

• jessica walked up to campus she loved this town she everyone and everyone knew her that could be a bad or good thing she was in alot of clubs she saw someone she didnt know which was very rare so she walked up to them
• she smiled her evil smile that she gets once in a while she had always been the troubled kid in middle school eyes growing dark purple
• WOW WAIT TO GO IDIOT YOU KNOW I HAVE KNOW FRIENDS YOU BULLIED ME ALL THROUGH MIDDLE SCHOOL I LIKE THE GENDERFLUID MORE THAN I LIKE YOU AND THARS LOW she turns her head towards sam no offense
• she rolls her eyes connor wouldnt care if i was dead you definitely wwouldnt care i dueling kiera so who really cares think about it
• there was some crys from inside she ran in and her newborn little siter was there with ciggrate burns and her 6 year old sister had a black eye and a cut lip jess fell to her kneees and hugged them they were the only family she had left and she let them down she let her mother do this to them she started crying from saddness and guilt
• she turned to normal and took her sister and dog making sure she couldnt touch them ALL YOU CARE ABOUT IS YOUR GOD reputation AND DONT EVER TOUCH MY DOG OR SISTERS and with that she stormed off taking her sisters and dogs with her
• she scratched her head uh well um kirea is watching the kids and my dog and me and connor are gonna go explore
• she smirked and held her hand out a red hot fireball forming in her palm she blasted it into the air which turned super hot you bectha

Kiera Okeke

• Kiera realizes Jessica is standing there as well. "Jessica, you don't even know how to play chess. Please. Step aside"
• Kiera snickered to herself and interrupted the conversation with a smirk on her face. "Woah Woah Woah everyone. What exactly is happening between you two?"
• Kiera snaps Jessica's arm back and kicks her in the shin. "STOP TALKING TO ME LIKE THAT I AM YOU'RE SUPERIOR BUT MORE IMPORTANTLY I'M YOUR FRIEND"
• Kiera was walking down the hall. She had never snapped at anyone let alone her only friend. Now she had lost her friend and made more enemies. She walked to the bathroom, making sure she didn't look in distress, and once inside, began to sob quietly. After a few minutes of sobbing, she stood, grabbed her things, wiped her eyes and walked out like nothing had happened. She held her stuff close to her and rushed to class. Another first, she was late.
• Kiera winced in pain and remained seated on the step. Once again she was clearly not welcome. Despite her efforts, she had failed her friends somehow. She put her head into her hands and thought hard. "What do I do"
• Kiera stood shaking her head. "Easy for you to say, you didn't just lose all your friends and ruin your reputation and your families legacy." She motioned to the large crowd that had formed.
• Kiera beams. "Welcome to my little home. Why don't I get the bath started for you guys. Here you can watch tv while I clean Raven." She clicks on the tv to some cartoons and takes the dog to get a bath.
• Kiera and the kids get on the light traveler and headed towards the campus arriving shortly after. It was time for a duel. Kiera smirked and sat down with the kids. "Are you ready for a show?"

Connor McGraves

• "I'm not going to fight you." Connor said. "That would be dangerous for anyone in the surrounding area." It would be fatal, Gnaw as a familiar was the ultimate killing machine, better not to engage.
• Connor sauntered into the room apathetically. "I'll bite." He said. He mugged the teacher, and took a long swill of his Arnold Palmer.
• "Sarcasm." Connor explained. He morphed into his familiar form completely, and took one many-eyed glance back, his concealed gun, in thigh holster, unlike the rest of his clothes, was intact. Cool! He chewed it off, and took the gun in his jaws.
• With the speed of a literal arrow, Connor whooshes off, ignoring his clothes, and bounds over the fencing of the school.
• Connor strolled back onto campus in a pair of grey sweats with black and white trim, black, grey, and white shoes, a grey tee, and a denim jacket with sleeves, and a hood, that were woolen and grey. He'd gotten into a fistfight at the pub last night, with a few guys, and almost didn't take care of it. "Damn." He said. "Morning again."
• A burst of white-hot fire, like lightning, again penetrates the space between the two. It's Connor, again. "Calm down you two." He said.
• "I dunno, but we moved, we're somewhere in the future now, you know this thing does that? Anyway, let's get some permits and explore."
• Connor stumbled back onto campus. "I guess people in the future are just as belligerent as they are in our time." He said. He'd gotten into yet another brawl with a group of people. "Oh well."