@Oakiin
I'd really appreciate it! I haven't had him looked at by enough people yet ^^
I'd really appreciate it! I haven't had him looked at by enough people yet ^^
From what Ive read so far from him I really enjoy this character. Id try and add a bit of science into the way he works by taking real concepts and tweaking them to fit in. Neuroplasticity, for example, is the brains ability to form/reform things that it may need (this could coincide with the "conditions" part where to talk about how he is gaining certain brain functions previously left out. I like what you've done with him but it would be cool to see a mix of some cool science (since he was made using it). Along with that, he seems very attached to your other characters. What would he do if he picked up on their distress? (i dont know if I just missed where you wrote this or not). How would he react to their sadness/anger? And how would he react if that sadness/anger was toward him?
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