forum I need to know if my character going over the top

Started November 09, 2019 by @NotSoBeautifulDiseaster group

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After being exposed for running some type of bullying ring and in result He is kicked off the football team (tbh he doesn't really care about sports), shunned for his two faceness and ignored by his shallow parents for "ruining" their reputation My antagonist of the arc, who values status above everything Elijah Lillian turns to fake a school shooting by fill a gun with tranquilizers to make it look like he killed some people so he could commit suicide by cop, It does end with he making amends with everyone and getting arrested

Is this just too much, and if it is how to substitute it

It's dramatic enough that I want to read it if that helps? I'd say it's very typical for someone to lash out like that but I'd never expect the tranquilizers, it's a good twist on there!

It's dramatic enough that I want to read it if that helps? I'd say it's very typical for someone to lash out like that but I'd never expect the tranquilizers, it's a good twist on there!

Thanks for the advice