@amber_is_in_a_loop
So I have this story that involves a couple, and I don't know how to make them liked as a couple? Where I'm at, the relationship seems forced, and I don't know how to fix that. Any ideas?
So I have this story that involves a couple, and I don't know how to make them liked as a couple? Where I'm at, the relationship seems forced, and I don't know how to fix that. Any ideas?
Show that they genuinely love each other. Have them hold hands, let one catch the other looking at them from time to time, hugs, forehead kisses, laughs, inside jokes, have them comfort each other in times of need. Things like this will make people think the couple is cute and the relationship won't seem as forced. Also, if possible, try building up to the relationship instead of just throwing them straight into it!
its good to have them be friends first
Two words: Slow. Burn.
A slow burn romance is when you take time to develop a relationship. They don't just magically get together instantly. Make them slowly realize their love for each other, make them pine after each other, frustrate your readers in the best way.
If it's an established couple, I agree with @Celestial-B. Don't make their love a chore or overly obvious. Make their love simple and sweet, with lots of fluff and heartwarming stuff.
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