forum I need help describing my characters if you could give me some feedback that would be great

Started October 01, 2019 by Destiny Tracy

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I have an idea about my characters but don't really know how to put into words, Junior is this mean juok but has a nice side to him if your lucky to see it and Serenitee is a quiet person but very loveable. Can you help me.

Hello!

Hi!

Is that all there is to go off of or what do you need me to do?

I would like some ideas on how to make my character better.

Sure! Could you give me a slight bit more for a description?

Serenitee is average height and not super skinny but not fat either, she has long dark brown hair and has glasses. She is very quiet but very assertive when it comes to education. She gets bullied every once in awhile and her friends envy that about her. Junior is a typical mean guy but he can be really nice. He is having a really rufe time dealing with his parents divorce. But once you get to know him he is kind of a dork and funny.

Wait. Serentiees friends are jealous that she gets bullied?

No because she doesn't get bullied that often. And they do.

Hi Hi!!! I'm the irl Serenitee <3

Lol

Oh! That makes sense. I really like the way you describe Junior because it reminds me of a kid that Im friends with.

Junior is my irl boyfriend. Destiny is writing a love story about us {lmao idk why}

Yeah me to.

Do you have any ideas I could use?

How about make Junior less of a prick? He's not that mean!

He is a big prick until you know him.

He isn't!

HE IS!!!!

Remember its alright for a character to be a prick sometimes. All people can be pricks sometimes, whether they mean to or not. You can also make a character lovable but make sure they dont look so innocent that they dont seem human. Everyone has there flaws even if they dont recognize it.

AGREED!!!!!!!!