forum I need constructive criticism

Started May 20, 2019 by @call_me_ep

tune

looking for someone to help edit my story! I've just started and I have a vague idea of what happens, but it needs work.

what kind of story do you have? genre? length? what are you most uncertain about? I might be able to help if you have patience (since I'm ridiculously busy this week). When reading a story I usually pay extra attention to the flow of a scene or sentence but I won't be much help for spelling.

It's a fantasy story about a girl who finds out her uncle may have killed a famous celebrity for unknown reasons. I've only written a few chapters so far. Basically I just need someone to tell me if it's any good or not, because it may or may not be trash. Flow is mainly what I'm focused on improving.

Ah, I see. if you want you can send me a few chapters with the send message option on my profile. it will probably take a while for me to get back to you but I'll do my best.