forum I need a smol critique please?

Started March 28, 2019 by @RainClouds_Itachi_

tune

this is in no way gonna take too long, I just need to know-

1. do they seem good as "the first deity"
2. are they mysterious enough or too mysterious
3. do they seem interesting enough

-and that's all I need to know, but I am open for ideas and suggestions !!
here's the link > Nothing

1. Maybe put a little note down somewhere about how he thinks of his creations, or how his creations think of him.
2. There's… not much to go on. So I guess it leans towards too mysterious. Right now it's like a bunch of random bones put together to form 1/3 of a skeleton and they're all different parts of the skeleton so no-one knows what it's supposed to be.
3. I don't know… I'm not sure what to think of them

1. It definitely makes sense to me, one of my first deities is also a goddess of nothing, so^^ I'd like to know how it created all though.
2. If you want them to be an actual character, they definitely need more info, but if they're just part of some distant pantheon I think they're fine.
3. I think they're intersting, their nature has a lot of potential. But again, if they're an actual character, it'll need to be a lot more in depth.

thank you both for the feedback !!
I do want it to be very mysterious, so I don't want to add too much info??
but I also have a few more ideas now bc of both of you so thanks !
Nothing is a very hard thing to work with-

I added some context in it's notes if you want to read it
I think it makes more sense now????
idk-

ah, yes. now the skeleton has some identifiable parts sticking out of the ground, like a toe or something. I'm gonna stick to this annology