forum I'm looking for a critique of my character, It's Alcides or as you non greek mythology nerds will know him, Herakles or Hercules

Started March 15, 2019 by walter

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Soooooo…… What would you like critique for?

just a critique in general, I want a full sense of what I'm doing right and wrong

How is his personality in terms of creating and maintaining relationships (romantic, platonic, business etc.) with others? I mean if he's based on (Disney/popular) Heracles I guess he's not to bad at it but since your giving it your own spin it might be different?
how's hiking a talent? is he just really good at walking? Asking for me, not necessarily wrong. OwO
what are his prejudices towards Worshippers of Hera and Snakes?
how does his flaw manifest?
And maybe elaborate a bit on why he's wandering around in his background. Other than that he seems oké to me.

Are you also going to write a version of the trial where he has to get Cerberus from Hades?