I'll Psychoanalyze Your Characters

Just send me either and RP link, a chapter of your story, or give a basic explanation. For the basic explanation, the analyzation will probably be less detailed.

Why you should let me do this: If your character can be analyzed in this way, they are a deep character that's developed enough to have actual personality traits.

@Moxie

Sam? Or is that too much to unpack lol?

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Oh no! I'll do her, it's gonna be pretty easy since you explained her backstory though. Lol.

Thaaaat is true.
Idk if this is relevant but in the actual story I'm putting her in she is much better off and its because she became friends with my mc. The rp is basically just if she never met him. (They do not become a couple. Just putting that out there.)

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Alrighty.
Well, she obviously has trauma based around men, most likely some touch aversion. Feels trapped in small places due to being molested. Runs to escape. She thinks that if she runs enough, she'll escape her memories.

@Oakiin

Here's my boy! I hope you have fun with him. ^^

(Do character profiles count Or would you rather a piece from the story?)

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I don't do character profiles. It's a personal preference and much harder to give an actual report instead of just copying what you've written.

@Becfromthedead

These three RP pages probably sum up Cyrus as a whole character best if you're interested. Also don't read the third one if gore/violence bothers you.

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Alright, let me get to the boi!

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Alright, just from the first page, you can tell Cryus has a very strong sense of family. He feels he needs others to watch him to make sure he doesn't slip in to any old habits. Hmmmm, let's see. For the longest time he needed to fight for survival, so fitting into a family could've been hard for him.

@Becfromthedead

Yeah, that’s about right

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Yeet

@Kaloobia

I hope an explanation is okay? I haven't written enough of her character yet in-story :P

Saskia is always very enthusiastic to initiate someone into her adventures, especially an old friend: she takes on the role of a mentor and excited travel partner and makes many, many promises for the future.
But then she gets distracted, and she gets caught up in her own things, and she forgets that this person is RELYING on her in a new environment that they know nothing about. She gets defensive when you point it out to her, ignores that you are hurt because you've just hurt HER, accusing her of not caring enough about you. She feels bad afterwards, but she doesn't know what to DO about it, doesn't understand what she's doing wrong, can't wrap her head around why someone wouldn't appreciate the journey she's taken them on.

Dora the Explora voice Can you guess what her tragic backstory is???

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Well first off, emotionally abusive parent. That's the thing I think of first.
She's been told so much from a parent that they were always right and whenever she tried to tell them they were doing something wrong, they used guilt.
She was probably told things like: "No, you should be greatfull I even feed you." "I gave birth to you, be thanking me." And stuff along the lines of this.

@Oakiin

Oh, okay ^^ Here's a link, the one I'd like analyzed is Boss ^^ https://docs.google.com/document/d/17vkQaXi-NI940M3xaE5bJdXoplwcj9Myqqooja5kbUM/edit?usp=sharing
(Though, if any thought spring up about the others, that's cool too ^^)
Thanks so much! I hope it's not too long! It's just the first chapter. I'm curious about what you'll think :D

@Kaloobia

Well first off, emotionally abusive parent. That's the thing I think of first.
She's been told so much from a parent that they were always right and whenever she tried to tell them they were doing something wrong, they used guilt.
She was probably told things like: "No, you should be greatfull I even feed you." "I gave birth to you, be thanking me." And stuff along the lines of this.

Ooh good instincts!! You’re right, Saskia did not have a great relationship with her parents, but the other big thing is that they both died very suddenly when she was 10; so along with growing up only knowing a certain kind of love from adults, she also has some complicated abandonment issues, or rather a detachment to the whole concept: she survived just fine, just fine, without parents breathing over her shoulder or telling her what to do (or offering her support, or helping her), so it’s obviously not hard to take things into your own hands. People have their own lives (people leave), what’s the big deal (everyone leaves, everyone dies), you’re a baby if you get so attached. Obviously these are all coping mechanisms and lies she tells herself haha.
Thank you for this!

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Oh, okay ^^ Here's a link, the one I'd like analyzed is Boss ^^ https://docs.google.com/document/d/17vkQaXi-NI940M3xaE5bJdXoplwcj9Myqqooja5kbUM/edit?usp=sharing
(Though, if any thought spring up about the others, that's cool too ^^)
Thanks so much! I hope it's not too long! It's just the first chapter. I'm curious about what you'll think :D

Okay, I just wanna say your writing is hella good.
Anyhow, this one's a bit harder, so it took some more time. Since it's not really from his point of view, it's harder.
But what I've gotten is that the demons are probably more of an annoyance than what they first were. If he had them when he was a baby, he probably thought they were imaginary friends, then, they started to scare him. They kept him up at night and lack of sleep leads to other things which includes anxiety and depression.

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Well first off, emotionally abusive parent. That's the thing I think of first.
She's been told so much from a parent that they were always right and whenever she tried to tell them they were doing something wrong, they used guilt.
She was probably told things like: "No, you should be greatfull I even feed you." "I gave birth to you, be thanking me." And stuff along the lines of this.

Ooh good instincts!! You’re right, Saskia did not have a great relationship with her parents, but the other big thing is that they both died very suddenly when she was 10; so along with growing up only knowing a certain kind of love from adults, she also has some complicated abandonment issues, or rather a detachment to the whole concept: she survived just fine, just fine, without parents breathing over her shoulder or telling her what to do (or offering her support, or helping her), so it’s obviously not hard to take things into your own hands. People have their own lives (people leave), what’s the big deal (everyone leaves, everyone dies), you’re a baby if you get so attached. Obviously these are all coping mechanisms and lies she tells herself haha.
Thank you for this!

Ah, no problem! But that adds to it.
Not great relationship+them dying before her brain completely developed = Hella issues.

@Oakiin

Oh, okay ^^ Here's a link, the one I'd like analyzed is Boss ^^ https://docs.google.com/document/d/17vkQaXi-NI940M3xaE5bJdXoplwcj9Myqqooja5kbUM/edit?usp=sharing
(Though, if any thought spring up about the others, that's cool too ^^)
Thanks so much! I hope it's not too long! It's just the first chapter. I'm curious about what you'll think :D

Okay, I just wanna say your writing is hella good.
Anyhow, this one's a bit harder, so it took some more time. Since it's not really from his point of view, it's harder.
But what I've gotten is that the demons are probably more of an annoyance than what they first were. If he had them when he was a baby, he probably thought they were imaginary friends, then, they started to scare him. They kept him up at night and lack of sleep leads to other things which includes anxiety and depression.

Aaahhhh thank-you!!! I'm so glad you think so <3
And yeah, that's entirely it xD He's just like okay, dude. Y'all old news.
Thanks for looking him over! I wish I had something with him more specifically in it, but, alas xD

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