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One of my characters in my sci-fi book has vitiligo and I want to know the most respectful way to describe his appearance. Anyone have any advice?
One of my characters in my sci-fi book has vitiligo and I want to know the most respectful way to describe his appearance. Anyone have any advice?
Lemme try my hand at it:
"A distinctive splash of unpigmented skin, standing out against his otherwise mahogany complexion, framed his dark eyes like a pale domino mask. The broad, long-fingered hands folded on his desk were similarly pale."
I mean, I wish I could offer something better than "character is implied to be attractive and/or charismatic; just so happens to have physical trait." But that's what sprung to mind.
Lemme try my hand at it:
"A distinctive splash of unpigmented skin, standing out against his otherwise mahogany complexion, framed his dark eyes like a pale domino mask. The broad, long-fingered hands folded on his desk were similarly pale."
I mean, I wish I could offer something better than "character is implied to be attractive and/or charismatic; just so happens to have physical trait." But that's what sprung to mind.
Thank you!
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