forum How to give this boi flaws
Started by @NotSoBeautifulDiseaster group
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@NotSoBeautifulDiseaster group

I'm having problems with one of my side character, Darnell Greigii, and I want to develop him past "snarky, stoic Morality Pet™ for his angsty jock boyfriend, I guess the problem is mostly he has no real flaws to speak of, I guess stubborn and snarky can count, but he hasn't had that many scenes of him being stubborn (if anything he seem polite and aloof) also consider that half the chapter he's in, he is knocked out and kidnapped by the villain , yes this is an episodic story and snark feels as much as a flaw as how usually clumsiness is used as a "flaw", Also for some more context, he is trying to stop his boyfriend, Aaron Phillett from bullying and he's supposed the sheltered, lonely rich kid archetype

@Fangirl616 group

You don't just 'add flaws'. A flaw is a virtue backward. For example, bravery is recklessness, trust can be naivety and putting too much faith into others, and confidence can be arrogance. If you think of a specific virtue that suits him, I can try to help find the corresponding flaw.