forum How does my universe sound?
Started by @jennifox
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Caboose

Okay sounds pretty good but just so you know… Buzz Lightyear is the ultimate Space Ranger. You could make them Space Rangers still , just make them wildly different in design and personality from Buzz (I know too easy) or come up with a slightly different name like Star Rangers, totally up to you my dude.

In your universe you should mention what Alien's you have there, are they all foreign to the system? Are some of them from the system and think the Humans are total dicks/invaders for claiming the system? Are the humans good rulers or is it a bit of a grey area that makes the Rangers question their job? What species belong to which planets? What kinds of cultures can we find in your system?

Also this is just personal preference and if you wanna you can just ignore me. It annoys me when planets/stars/space stuff is given a few letters and numbers/ Names and numbers work for me for some reason . Since you have two Solar systems you could go in for a name, or maybe keep the original but maybe gradually use the original inhabitants name for the system. I dunno. Other than that have fun.

@jennifox

I like the idea of the system having a name given by the original inhabitants, and will definitely be using that idea. I'm still working on creating other aliens, but I do have one race called the Grelnees. Humans don't necessarily rule, but the rich can still make a difference to both humans and aliens - whether that be good or bad.
Anyway, thanks for the feedback! This will help a lot with my worldbuilding and I'll hopefully make my universe much better.