forum Hi can you gimme your thoughts on my boy here?
Started by Caboose
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@Yamatsu

I feel like a lot of information is missing from this character. What is the Rogues Gallery? How did he come to lead it? Why is his father abusive? Also, I think some information is missing under Hobbies, as it only says "Caleb." I am fully prepared for a Johnny Bravo-like character that is only interested in himself (and girls, and chicks, and babes, don't forget babes), but I don't think it would work for a character so devoted to his sister. Why does the world hate Neo-Humans? What do you mean by "…the world was broken a bit" when referring to the age after Heroes? Why did the Heroes go away? Was it like the Incredibles, where a legal scandal forced them into hiding, or did they all somehow die? There's a bit of worldbuilding that needs to be done to help flesh out this character.

Caboose

Okay so the Age of Heroes is mostly just background plot but basically Superheroes were pretty common but crisis after crisis took a toll on the world and resulted in a semi post apocalypse. So there's badlands and not enough resources. The Rogues Gallery is the team of all of his friends. It seriously has his name under hobbies? lol ima fix that. Neo Humans are basically born super humans. Their powers can pop up at random and when that happens they have no clue how to control them so that makes them dangerous. Especially since most cases happen to children. His dad abuses him because his wife was killed by Neo-Human terrorists plus he's an all around piece of garbage ( for real though not lazy writing, irl the reasons for kids being abused is usually petty and simple) He is over protective more than anything. He basically acts as a big brother to all the Rogues so they listen to him. there's only a few of them.

Caboose

Also I've already done shitloads of world building just not here lol. This was just so I could remember certain aspects of the character. But I've put the previous answers in the notes section so enjoy.