forum heyy can you please judge my girl? Thanks!

Started August 23, 2018 by @sharkfinn_ey

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Lily Greenheart This is her, please checkout her pinterest-board as well as this gives a rounded view of her. She needs some serious judgement.

Thanks beforehand!!

she sounds like a charecter from a romance movie but at the same time, a character from supernatural.

Ok, I'm on a time limit so I had to skim over most of it (sorry!) but from what I read, I really love Lily! One of the questions I have is why did she abandon her religion? Did something bad happen to her? I have more but i'll add on later. So far so good!

Ok, I'm on a time limit so I had to skim over most of it (sorry!) but from what I read, I really love Lily! One of the questions I have is why did she abandon her religion? Did something bad happen to her? I have more but i'll add on later. So far so good!

Don't be sorry, I really appreciate it! She did because she found out she's a demon, which led her to believe she couldn't be a good christian. She's like an all or nothing person. Hope that clears out!

She sounds awesome. Like someone I would be friends with. I really like like her and I really wish I could create such good characters. Just 1 question though. If she was a demon, how was she a christian in the first place? As far as I've heard, demons are afraid of anything that has to do with Christianity. Maybe I just read something wrong but could you please explain this to me? Sorry if I sound rude or something but i just didn't really understand.

She sounds awesome. Like someone I would be friends with. I really like like her and I really wish I could create such good characters. Just 1 question though. If she was a demon, how was she a christian in the first place? As far as I've heard, demons are afraid of anything that has to do with Christianity. Maybe I just read something wrong but could you please explain this to me? Sorry if I sound rude or something but i just didn't really understand.

Don't worry you're not being rude at all! Thank you for reading through her :)
In my story 'demons' work a little differently than you'd expect. Some people were demons and were 'bannished', aka born into normal human beings. Those humans don't feel the hate and anger the demons did back then in hell. They have completely forgotten about that. And her parents/family were all Christians, so she just grew up with that.
However, after traumatic expierences they start to remember those things, and with Lily there were already cracks when she was with Frida.
After Frida's death she snapped and ran away from her friends to prevent any further harm to the group.
This story finds place a little bit further into the future by the way.

Lily sounds like a cute character i would like if i met her. The only thing i would overthink is.. maybe you want to add a motivation? Learning as much as possible is nice, but i don't feel like it's something which is hard to archive and having a motivation which is kind of easy to do/archive is boring in the story. She needs something, which is complicated to get, so the story is set on her journey to archive it. And by the way, i saw that you described her room which was really nice, i've got website for you, if you want to design it: https://roomstyler.com

Lily sounds like a cute character i would like if i met her. The only thing i would overthink is.. maybe you want to add a motivation? Learning as much as possible is nice, but i don't feel like it's something which is hard to archive and having a motivation which is kind of easy to do/archive is boring in the story. She needs something, which is complicated to get, so the story is set on her journey to archive it. And by the way, i saw that you described her room which was really nice, i've got website for you, if you want to design it: https://roomstyler.com

Thank you so much for the site!! i've looked so long for a site/app to do that.
I find motivations always very hard, but I'm going to update it into helping her friends stay safe (there is another demon in play) and control her own anger/hatred.
Now she isn't the main/main character and will be leaving the screen for a chapter or two now, motivations are indeed important so thank you for pointing them out!