forum Heyo hard-mode critique my boi i hate him

Started September 17, 2018 by @AloeVera groupMentallyImInACottage

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that was a lie i don't hate him but he's a terrible person morally so

anyway be brutally honest please

hard mode???????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????/ dont be so Pretentious -anubis

literally jean is perfect don't start with me

wait please critique my good boy man sir buddy homeslice pal mate -anubis

you mention no nervous habits, but does this end up in destructive behaviour because he can't let it all out?
how come he looks so aware of everything, or is that just himself and his own actions?
if it does include other things it might make him a bit paranoid.
he doesn't seem a kind person, more like a mysterious character in a background that you can't help but notice and feel intriqued with.
how come he's so good at it? does it make him full of himself? does he care about what other people think (about him)?
The cat cafe is a surprisingly sweet thing to mention! so he obv likes cats, what other animals/drinks/ foods does he like?

what you mention in personality type is great because that's exactly how he's making me feel so far!
politics are kinda funny with all the political mess going on, he's right about that.
Does he hang around with that friend with the red shirt a lot? Is it just platonic or more?
I'm sorry that I don't have time for the rest of his board right now, I'll try and continue later today!

Ah, thank you very much! I'm excited to see what else you've got haha

Hi!! You've stated in the Nature category that you might call him chaotic neutral, but I'm not entirely sure that corresponds with the idea that he's curious about how the world will crumble before him. Other than that he seems to be a well-developed character! His personality for me is a bit too perfect, though his flaws counteract most of that in an understandable way. Good luck!

Thank you for that haha I'll go edit that now :)

No problem, but remember that this is just a suggestion - you don't have to change anything, and sometimes it can depend more on how you write the character!