forum Hey yall, been a while for this character, Got any ideas / Critiques for her?
Started by @Echellia group
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@saor_illust school

Hey, Min-Jee Zhou looks like an awesome character! I do have a few key points though-

  • For her body type, what else about her body type? Is she a bit chubby, perhaps nice and rounded, or maybe she doesn't have any extra fat. (In which case better for her health!)
  • Alright, so Min-Jee has a tattoo of a dragon on her leg. How big? Does it stretch from her ankles to her thighs? Or is it smaller, from her ankles to her knee? What colour(s) is the tattoo?
  • So Min-Jee twirls her hair in her fingers… sometimes? A lot? Or only when she's nervous?
  • You list her birthday simply as "27th / 6th". What does that mean? In addition, there is no month listed! If you're having trouble picking a date/a month, day, or year, put some placeholders in! Or better yet, list the birthday as "currently unknown" and set down your selected month/day/year or options that you're considering in the notes section.
  • You also list in her background "When after the incident with her family when she was 15 (he was 18) she decided - almost for both of them because by this time Min-Jee was quite good at convincing her brother of things - that they should fight against the Rose Holding Company, in any way that they could." What incident? Include at least one detail about the incident, for example if the Rose Holding Company was responsible for the injuries caused to her mother (I'm just saying if I was writing it, that might be something I might add like oh, they injured her mother on purpose as say, a warning), then that's why Min-Jee and her adoptive brother resolved to go against the company.

Other than that, Min-Jee is a really interesting character!