forum Help With Characters

Started January 27, 2018 by @itskayhere

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Can anyone look and see if my character are a good fit, or like or they well developed.
(Can you click on my username and look that way or do I have to give you the link? Not sarcasm lol like really.)

Hey, I just read about Asha Peters and I think she is an interesting character, even though the mannerism confuse me a little. The ones that you wrote are not mannerism, mannerism is like scratching the back of your head when you are uncomfortable or start to low the volume of your voice when you feel nervous. Also maybe you could talk a bit more about her background.
Anyway, Asha is a quite good character and I honestly love her name, so good luck with your story
-A
P.S. you should send the link of the character you want us to read about

can I ask you to read about my character too?
Here is the link Invalid Character (it's a work in progress)

Clementine Clementine Diana Hastings
Jay Justin Drew Bieber
Fiona Fiona Rose Bieber
Jeremiah Jeremiah Zane Bieber
Mel Melinda Lauren Archer
Rae Rachel Michelle Andrews

Here is everyone else

I can definitely help you out, but I need permission to look at it.

sorry, i don't know how to do that, can you explain me?

When you go to your character page, click the share icon (a triangle or arrow with three dots) and it will ask if you want to give permission.

now it's working?

I loved Aren't character I always lo e the girl who is the smartest in the room.

*love

thank you