forum Help me with my half-protag?
Started by @CopperQueen
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@CopperQueen

In my story the perspective is shared between two best friends from the same group of assassins and I would like some help with my less developed one,Cameron:

If you could provide any critique or suggestions it would be greatly apreciated.

Mercedes

Hm, I like them so far. Could you explain more on how their pride motivates them? I understand the identity motivation, but I fail to see where Pride comes in.

@CopperQueen

Hm, I like them so far. Could you explain more on how their pride motivates them? I understand the identity motivation, but I fail to see where Pride comes in.

I's mostly because they have a really fragile sense of pride, and refuse any kind of humiliation orother things that could come oout of backking out/refusing the things happening in their story. Therefore,they're motivated by pride.