forum Help me out and critique my girl Alice?

Started February 22, 2019 by @jantz

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duuuuude she's so cool!!
the only critiques i have are:

1) i have no idea what the spell names are, idk if that really matters but maybe you could put a translation and/or pronunciation
2) she's the child of an elven queen and a human woman. how did that work, genetically? but idk how elves work in your story so maybe you've already gotten that worked out

other than that, everything looks good and i love her

duuuuude she's so cool!!
the only critiques i have are:

1) i have no idea what the spell names are, idk if that really matters but maybe you could put a translation and/or pronunciation
2) she's the child of an elven queen and a human woman. how did that work, genetically? but idk how elves work in your story so maybe you've already gotten that worked out

other than that, everything looks good and i love her

thanks :)
i fixed up the background to make it all more clear and the spells don't really need to be pronounced because the casters don't chant the spells when casting.
thanks for the input