forum Hello Fellow Writers! Character Critiques Please!
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Alessandra Sweet Briar Rose

Are the flower\plant names common for wherever she's from? If not, is there a very specific reason she was named this? Is she embarrassed by this name or proud of it? Does she decide to make use of\poke fun at the name by using\wearing briar roses?

Very expressive face that gets more and more scrunched up as she gets annoyed.

This is a really cute detail~

Terrible, terrible fashion sense, although she's always trying to give people clothing advice.

Again: Adorable~

Listens to her Father to much.

*too much

Her father encouraged her to take part in a very simple religion based off Christianity called Thjeshte. She attends church and takes part in religious celebrations.

But does she actually believe, or is more perfunctory?

In public, she says it's her crown, but it's actually a small, wind up owl she made when she was little.

Seriously, I love her character. She's got a bunch of opinions and her personality comes through really well with what you've put down. She's feisty and cute. (I'm also a super huge fan of her love interest being another girl, but that's purely personal.)

My final assessment is that this is a beautifully realized chracter. She's got flaws and draws and opinions and she just shines. She's perfectly imperfect~

Opal in a Cave

This is a very well thought out character. I can see you put a lot of time into creating her and she has a personality that I can see a lot of the writer in. I like that even though she is spoiled and sometimes rude, she likes math and engineering and is inventive. Breaking the 'dumb blonde' stereotype. I can't wait to see more of characters from this story and I hope I get a chance to read this story!

@Cryptidswearingcrocs

Honestly, I love how you handled her! I like how she's opinionated and spoiled and has tons of prejudices and flaws and has to develop and get better, and I also love how she's still determined and inventive,which balances it all out.Also,as a lesbian,I love how she has a love interest who's a girl,but that's just personal! Overall,she's a well-balance characters with good flaws and motivations and sounds great!