@Wheeze_For_Me
I’m in the mood for some characters to judge.
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GIMME SOME CHARACTERS (to critique) (sorry that was aggressive)
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@faltering_through pets
I got one but just a warning that he's still a work in progress XDD i don't even know where im going with this guy
@101virus101
I have one
@jantz
Alice I guess
@Kinarymo
Take a look at my boyo?
nicolovingx
@Wheeze_For_Me
I got one but just a warning that he's still a work in progress XDD i don't even know where im going with this guy
Why was he all cocky as a teen? Why doesn’t he like being reminded of people who call him those nicknames? Can you put in some information about his family? Does he have anxiety? (Since you said “when he gets anxious”)
@Wheeze_For_Me
I have one
It’s good but maybe add a bit more information into a lot of things. The more information the bettter. Aside from that it’s really good. Also maybe add some stuff about family.
@Wheeze_For_Me
Alice I guess
That’s great. Nothing to critique honestly. I don’t know what to say other then it’s great!
@Wheeze_For_Me
Take a look at my boyo?
Maybe put what type of chocolate he likes? Other then that I love how much detail you put into this. Have a great time with your boyo.
@Wheeze_For_Me
Remember to check spellings e.g. traitor. “Simple home cooked meal” that is a very broad term. I like spaghetti and Hoki fish but I don’t like Shepard’s pie. See? Rarely anyone if no one likes all homemade dishes. Other then that it’s all good!
@Wheeze_For_Me
I’m so, so sorry for the wait. School really hates me.
@jantz
you're fine, my dude
Mikey
@Wheeze_For_Me
Please help
Be as harsh as you possibly can
destroy him
idc
make me cry if you have to
Emilie Staal
here you go, just some context, think 18th-century Celtic regions but with all the folklore
@Torpion language
hi could you beat up my son
thx bruh/sis
@SupernaturalSyGuyIsTIred group
Careful what you wish for!
