@ardechoke October 21, 2018 Hey! I'll give you an honest review on your characters, and probably offer some suggestions to help flesh them out. I'll be gentle but firm, promise. If you don't agree, that's completely fair, and you might get a better opinion elsewhere, hah!
Deleted user October 22, 2018 Could you critique Azura please? She is fairly new, so she needs it, bad lol
