forum Feedback on this character?
Started by @nuetella
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@nuetella

For context, this is the protagonist of a (potential-) visual novel I'm planning on writing. ^^
I kept the backstory section purposefully brief bc I didn't want to end up like, writing the entire plot synopsis there (although uh, it's not really fully planned out anyway lol) but yeah, apart from that I'd love to hear people's thoughts on her and if she's a okay character!
Ignore the messy placeholder art, I just reused a sketch for a danganronpa oc, I'm giving her a proper design later lol

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i. love her?
her looks are really cool. kinda reminds me of wednesday addams
i like how internal her emotions are. she seems like she'd have a very cool exterior
also the going with gut feeling thing is really relateable and i feel like any wack situation that comes out of that could be a cool plot point :)
she's really stubborn without being rude and it takes a lot of hard work to keep a character on the passive side of that trait so props to u
(also i love doll customization so thats just a reason to love her even more)
as for a weapon, if you wanted any suggestions for a weapon she'd eventually pick up along the story line i can totally see her with a heavy antique umbrella, idk why
i can't find a single thing wrong with her and shes lovely

@nuetella

aaaaa thank you!
I don't know how she'd get one but i love the idea of her fighting with an antique umbrella and im 100% stealing that-

ty for the feedback!