forum Feedback on my boy.

Started December 10, 2018 by @Keeja

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Heyo! I've been working on my character Jackson and, I mean, I still have a pretty long way to go, but I'd like to hear some of your opinions: Ezekiel Jackson Smith

Hello! He has a pretty solid backstory, but I think you should detail his personality a bit more. Putting down Myer-Briggs normally only comes after a thorough discussion of how they act.

Wassup! I really like Jackson, he seems really cool. I agree with degdeg, the personality is a bit lacking. Here are a few things that have helped me with character personalities.
*What makes him smile?
*What triggers bad memories?
*What drives him?
*Is he generally cheerful, or subdued?
*Does he hide his feelings or is he open with them?
*How does he act when he is angry?
*What is his fatal flaw?
*Does he have any guilt, deserved or not?
*What kind of music does he like?

Hope all this helps!

Thank you, Joy! And yes this does help.

As for the physical description, he is described as being very athletic (-looking at least). I would suggest either making him taller (to about 6'1 to be healthy) or make him lighter (to about 155 lb). I'm looking at a BMI chart, and it looks like Jackson is overweight.
These are just suggestions based on standard healthy proportions according to a BMI chart, so do what you want with this info