forum Does any one want to critique my first “finished” oc

Started February 08, 2018 by @Holy-ghosts

tune

I would but it looks like its on private

Fixed it

Is this a friend of yours irl?

If your referring to the photo no it’s one I found online, but if your referring to the the character it’s just an oc from one my stories

I will

AWWWW I like him!!! Okay, critique time: I like his appearance a lot. It's interesting without being overly weird. His mannerisms, motivation, and flaws are all very nice. His prejudice made me smile bc honestly same. Talents and hobbies are good, too. His personality type is great and all, but there's not much there. You say he gets assertive when angry and he's kinda cocky, so maybe tell us in personality type who sets him off, when he gets overly cocky, who is he rebellious against, etc.

Everything else looks good, except one HUGE glaring issue…where is his backstory???? Background is the most important thing to a character! It tells us why he is the way he is. So tell us about his upbringing, anything important that happened in his childhood, anything that lead up to the story, his relationships, etc.

Lots of potential here. Good luck.