forum Critiques on my Marvel OC? (Also if anyone is any good at drawing...)

Started December 10, 2018 by Deleted user

tune

aww, you're character is still at private! If you go to their 'page' you can put them on public

There’s a share button near the edit button, if you click it it’ll give you the option to make your character public or you can make the entire universe public and all the characters, items, languages, etc associated with that universe will become public.

try now
sorry I just joined

No need to say sorry, I'm sure every one on here has experienced this haha.
He's in the Cap/iron man etc etc Mcu, but he also gives me a bit Xmen vibes/ agents of shield (if you don't know Agents of shield yet, look it up, it's awesome and it'll break your heart).
Surgically enhanced, was this his choice or was he captured and an expendable test-person? How does he look back on it?
You mention Ptsd, can you tell me further about how this impacts his day to day life, what are the triggers? How does he react on it? And where did it come from, what traumatic experience?
For example, does he get flashbacks/ panic attacks/outbursts of anger?

You mention a lot of characteristics in the personality type, which is great! I personally would develop more how these affect him.
I'd also put things here that he absolutely loves, hates etc.
Are his wings always visible? can he fold them behind him? How does this affect clothing/backpacks etc
It might be fun to tell a bit about how he became an avenger, but that's just me and my marvel-love haha
Why does he clash with Tony but still adore him? How is he team Cap and does this play a big role in your story?

That's it for now, I think you did a great job!

thank you! I'll go in and update those things. I wrote an entire novella simply on his backstory which I'm considering posting on here, but I'm worried about people taking it and claiming it as their own. most of the backstory questions you have are answered in the book