forum Critique your characters
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@Hey_Its_Snowy_And_Im_Generally_Confused

DRAG HIM

Name: Willem “Will” Reynolds
Age: 25
Gender: Male
Sexuality: Heteroflexible
Appearance: Light, curly dirty blonde hair that’s short on the sides and long on the top, turns light brown in the winter, medium tan skin, light sea foam green yes that sparkle in the light, freckles across his nose and on his neck, one dimple on the right side of his face, kind of an upturned button nose, lean build, slightly muscled, 5’10, oddly big feet, smallish shoulders, looks like he’s gonna cry a lot for some reason even though he’s very happy and likes to joke, wears athletic jackets and sweatpants most of the time, but sometimes wears dress shirts when he’s feeling fancy
Personality: Needs to be occupied, doing something all the time, tries to look on the bright side of things, constantly cracking jokes, not the sharpest tool in the shed but he’s got a good heart, cries a lot despite all of this, some things just make him super upset, especially people being hateful, kinds depressed when he’s on is own but doesn’t show it, clingy but in a good way, loves his friends to death and doesn’t take crap from anyone who disrespects them, very lazy and procrastinates a lot while wishing he had the willpower to actually do stuff, lived off of ramen noodles, McDonalds, and CapriSuns.
Other: tells everyone he’s a Gryffindor bUT is totally a Hufflepuff, wears glasses at night when he takes his contacts out.

@_ava_read

Usually you would have dimples on both sides of your face
You said he was usually happy but then you said that he cries a lot, maybe decide if he cries when he's alone and is happy in front of his friends?
I really like the hogwarts comparison
he seems to live in this universe and he seems like a normal teenager, nice job

@Hey_Its_Snowy_And_Im_Generally_Confused

I put a little bit of myself on there since I only have one dimple
I like the idea about the drying thing, things upset him a lot but it usually only lasts for 15 minutes so the rest of her time he’s happy
Thanks for the critique, I’ll edit him a bit!