forum Critique this character?

Started July 23, 2018 by @Paperok

tune

One thing to say is that she is slightly overweight, though that doesn't conflict with her body type, so you're good.
Other than that, she seems like a pretty normal person.

Thanks for the critique! Normal is the goal

I'll start off with questions haha: Why does only her father call her Freddy+ where does that come from?
How can she come off as self-absorbent?
Her fave possesion is her skateboard, is she good at it? how long has she been skating? She's a teenager so a "typical teenager rebellion-hobby" (as some call it) is nice, even more because she wants to become a police-officer.
Is she very active in the search of her mother? does it affect her daily life and does she miss her/a mother figure?

Mannerisms are good! maybe add one or two more, but the one you have is great!
I think she's good so far, but if she's your maincharacter I'd give some more extensively information.

Her father calls her Freddy because when she laughs her face scrunches and he says she looks like him, jokingly of course.

She can come off self-absorbed since she talks rudely and interrupts others giving off the vibe that she does not care how they feel on the subject. She isn't completely apathetic people just think she is.

She has been skating since middle school. since she skates a lot she is very good at it.

She sees her mother as a lost cause, she sometimes thinks about her but refuses to let it distract her from what she wants in her life.

She is a side character in the story, I'll probably add more. The fact that these questions came up shows me what I need to update on her profile, Thank you for the critique; IT WAS VERY HELPFUL!!