forum Critique this character?

Started July 24, 2018 by @Paperok

tune

I started laughing as soon as I saw that nickname lol, what did he do to earn that nickname?
He's quite tall for his age, or maybe that's just me haha.

His goals are good. Prejudices are recognizable, who doesn't dislike over-popular people?
Does he still have his overfried motherboard? why does he like it so much? Does he write daily, in notebooks or on his computer?
If he's your main character i'd flesh him out a bit more, especially his background and personality traits (like fiddling hair, clothing style, personal care, struggles etc).

lol, "Roatsed earbuds" is his favorite username, its supposed to be because of all the rage he gets sent while wrecking other players.

Yep he keeps it in his drawer. It's a fond memory. He writes on both notebooks and online. He writes every chance he gets.

He isn't the main character but I know what I need to fill in thanks to your questions. Thanks for the critique!

This is a really clever character so far! I like him a lot.
You almost definitely want to add some more flaws, some more serious ones, to him though. Not leaving his house much seems like it fits with his personality, but it's more of a habit and choice then flaw. To keep a character real, it's good to add some personality flaws that aren't endearing, but really are bothersome and irritating to other characters. This is important, especially with the Best Friend role.
I love the idea of a dedicated writer, prejudices are great, and, he genuinely seems well thought out. Nice job!

Thanks for the critique! That makes sense!