forum Critique this character? 2.0

Started July 24, 2018 by @Paperok

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*Richard Fenn
-Looks
He’s overweight for his height but I’m guessing he has a dad bod.
-Nature
Tell me what he does when he’s in different moods. What does he do when he’s happy? What does he do when he’s mad?
-History
His history is a bit barren. What did he do as a child? Did he have any friends? Does he have any friends? Just give me a full detailed description of his life.
-Overall
He doesn’t seem like that important of a character. I mean like, I’m sure he is an important character, but I can’t get a feel of how he helps the story. He just seems really bland.

Yeah, that's why I put "bulky" in his body type.
That makes sense. Alright.
Barren? I suppose. His child life isn't relevant to his character but you're right ill go fluff it up some.
He helps the story by fathering Paul and Crystal. Raising them. If that didnt come off as obvious I should just work the profile a bit more.
Thanks for the critique, it was helpful