forum Critique ples?
Started by @Zandra2119
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@HighPockets group

Okay so:

  • Is 'Bie' pronounced 'Bee' or 'Bi'?
  • She's very underweight for a 22 year old, 5'4" woman. She should be around 133 lbs, 114 lbs at the lowest
  • What shade of blue is her hair? Is all of it died or just the tips, or half of it?
  • What is her natural hair color?
  • Flaws seem a little surface level

All in all she's really interesting!

@Kaloobia

  • If I may say, develop her personality a little bit more? She's sarcastic and closed-off, but there must be more to her. Is she a pessimist, because of her past, or an optimist because of her ambitions for the future and her hope to make her father proud? (Or a realist, aware of her conditions but vowing to make the best of it, within reason?) How long does it take, and what does it take, for her to warm up to a person? Is she easily angered, and if so what subjects/behaviors rile her up (politics, being told what to do, witnessing injustice, etc.)? Just a few questions to start off.
  • I LOVE the gallery :)

Very interested in how her story develops!