forum Critique my Tea Witch?
Started by @aesthetic
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@blue_topaz

Love her! (nice name, by the way :) I'd say you need to elaborate more on the whole "Nature" section, but other than that she's pretty great :D

@LavenderZo Premium Supporter

She is very interesting, but i have two points. first) what exactly is a 'tea witch?' second) you seem to give her only "endearing flaws", meaning her flaws and prejudices only work to make her more likable, and not to give depth to her personality.

@aesthetic

  1. There was no space for me to explain what a Tea Witch exactly is, because you have to pay to create magic, however it's my fault for not putting it somewhere. A Tea Witch is a witch that specializes in brewing magic teas, like teas that can make you feel a certain way or do a certain thing. It's similar to potions in a way I guess. They can also turn liquids into tea instantly if they have the tea leaves with them. They can also do basic things like riding brooms and such.
  2. I couldn't really think of flaws that would suit her too well. But you're right, I appreciate the feedback and I'll put more time into thinking of flaws and such.

@sharkfinn_ey

heyy, she seems very likeable! i sure like her! I have some questions;

  • did she dye her hair like that or is it natural? does her hair fit her shop? (like is it the same colours as the interior of the shop?)
  • does she stay away from vampires? is she scared of them?
  • are there specific owl species she attracts? like it would be very interresting to see e certain species that's attracted to her. have one very specific owl visit her every night/dawn maybe.
  • I am very interested in her shop, would you like to tell us ore about it? like what kind of cups, are there plants, what's the atmosphere and so on.

I think you did a great job! she's cute, kind, and indeed gives me a warm feeling like a good cup of tea does. Well done!

@aesthetic

I was going for a soft witchy vibe when I created her, and this color reminded me of her. Warm and soft on the eyes. It is natural because it's a fantasy world and I thought it would blend in more.
She tends to stay away from most vampires. She does have fear in the back of her mind when she speaks to one. It's not very noticeable, but there's small details like an uneasy look in her eyes.
Actually, I did have the idea of mostly "short-eared owls" visiting her. She always grew up around them (due to her growing up in a forest area with lots of large trees). She enjoys their soothing company.
The atmosphere in her store is very calming. She has lots of candles that are floating about (not in people's way, of course. similar to Harry Potter) which have enchantments of tranquility. The color scheme isn't the same as her hair, but it's mostly wood and red accents (like the chairs being red and such). She has lots of plants in there, mostly sitting by windows. She owns a watering can which is able to water the plants itself. She has lots of bookshelves so people can read if they'd like to. She doesn't enjoy anything more than a good cup of tea and reading.

Thank you for the feedback, I really appreciate it.