forum Critique my guy?

Started September 04, 2018 by @@Wanheda

tune

1. why does he hate people that exploit others? did something happen to make him that way?
2. what is he the sentinal of?
   also love your character

1. Who doesn't hate people like that? lol Its gonna be addressed in the story.
2. Sentinel is just a synonym for guard, soldier, warrior, etc it's not exactly a title like General or King or President.

thanks.

why does he have to be such a serious character?

Because it's not a comedy.

fair enough but does he have a personal life?