forum Critique my Fox-girl?
Started by @LilNerdyGingerKitsune
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Sandra Renee Melton

I like it alot , what is really great is your consistency in your character. I feel like you could add alot more to the backround story. Such as what she has learned during her time with the priest. Or maybe what her life was like while living there during the time she stayed. Did she and the priest form a bond like a father and daughter. Do they laugh alot at jokes Ginger tries to tell? Does he show cold indifference when in reality he relly loves her like a child and wants the best for her? Does ginger know that place like the back of her hand? What does she think of being a fox , does ginger like being half human?
What would be gingers plan on stopping the “curse” she has? Or does she think it is a blessing in some way and lets her see the world in a new fascinating way. Tell me about her restless spirit and love for new things. Tell me what kind of music she likes to play and were she might have learned it! I think everything else you made about her is quite spot on, Ginger is very well made.