forum Critique My Child

Started March 06, 2018 by @Fraust

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The link is private, if you change it I can look at your character.

Sorry! I fixed it

Sounds good! Although I would add more detail all around. He sounds like a really fun character though!!

Thanks!

omg he's adorablleee! i agree with a little more detail all around, but if he's just a casual character, he's great. i'm a little worried about how he's 85 pounds at 5'1, but if that's your character, that is your character

@neopetsadmin Whoops! Sorry! I meant to write 95, sorry for the confusion ^^;

I like him! I also want to know more though like why he was moved to island 1578 and why his house burned down. He sounds super cool though!

He looks and sounds cool! If you add how long his hair is that might help with the description

Thanks for the advice :)