forum Critique my characters please?

Started October 28, 2018 by @Ok_Kaii group

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Thanks in advance!

Alright, Dove sounds pretty legit. The only real problem is the "nature" section sounds a bit contradictory. Maybe there's more info in your head, or I didn't read it enough. I would take another look at it and try to figure out exactly what you mean. Like, does she arc from her colder personality to a warmer one?

And Ryker , impulsive and knowledge-hungry, yet still somehow good at strategy. My thought process would lead me to believe that his impulsivity would make him bad at strategy. Unless he's good at it in the sense that he's good at chess, for example, but chooses to ignore that and acts on a whim because he feels like it, or needs that knowledge of something.

Or it could be that he thinks his plans are right, and therefore anyone who doesn't agree (or those who know better) is wrong.

Possibly. I don’t really know, which was what I was trying to say. Sorry. 😊