forum Critique my characters?
Started by @lonnielei
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@lonnielei

So I'm writing a musical about Anne Frank, and I've decided that I should get everyone's characters/personalities DOWN before I start any lyrics or writing the script (though I'm writing those down as I get inspired for them as well. ;) ) I have 10 characters, none of whom I'm very confident in, but I'll start out with 3 and people can critique/ask me about them as they wish!

@p3ncil

I looked over Anne Frank, everything looks super in-depth and well thought out, but go more into her prejudices? Why is she prejudiced towards these people?