forum Critique my character plz?

Started February 20, 2019 by Caboose

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https://www.notebook.ai/plan/characters/576400- This is one of my older characters Beau. I'm just looking at making him better

Sorry I didn't see this for so long!
Okay, so I've just got a few questions:

1. Why is he either too trusting or not trusting enough?
2. Why, specifically, does he want to be normal? Is his life unsatisfying in some way that he feels could be rectified if he wasn't a Neo-Human?
3. Why is his trust hard to get back when it's broken?

I really like his character, I just was wondering about his personality and where certain components of it came from. Hope I helped somewhat.

Some details you gotta save for the story in my opinion. But for 2. Being a Neo-Human for him is being a ticking time bomb that could go off anytime he isn't careful, anytime he isn't watching his back and isn't prepared.