Hello! I've been working on this character for a while and I want to develop her so much more but I'm not sure how to go about it. Some things aren't finished yet like politics and such so please don't mind that too much I'll be finishing it as well.
I find it odd that a Half-Angel/Half-Demon character is atheist. Given the existence of angels and demons in your story, it seems strange that she doesn't believe in her own Mom and Dad? Or the gods that created both her and the universe around her?
Oh yes you're right! I will have to fix that. Thanks for pointing it out!
Hi! I think your doing a great job so far with Ria- here are just a few questions I had
Does Ria know she is half-angel/half-demon? If she does, how did she find out? (since she had no memory)
Does she have any distinguishing half-angel/half-demon body parts (like wings or horns)?
Why does Ria hate cheaters? Did something happen in her past?
Why doesn't she like eye contact? Does it make her uncomfortable?
Who gave Ria her favorite necklace?
How old was she when she woke up in Puddinland?
Does she enjoy using magic?
Yeah she does know. Her friends were the ones who told her especially her archangel friend.
Yeah she has both horns and wings that distinguishes her from the others.
Well she saw how one of her friend’s cheating habits destroyed his family and caused his divorce
Yeah she gets pretty uncomfortable making eye contact with others
One of her friends who comes from a long line of sorcerers
About 12-13 years old
Yeah she loves using it