forum Critique my character

Started December 19, 2019 by Deleted user

tune

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Here's my character

Please Critique it

I don't really critique characters often, but I know a thread for good character critiques. You should check it out.

This is my first time doing anything like this- But i think it's pretty good. Maybe try to explain a bit more of how she got into that situation. Scarlet wants revenge, what did Allison do? Just a bit more background, otherwise is gud

hey