forum Critique my character?
Started by @Torpion language
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@Torpion language

I feel like I've finished fleshing him out, but I wanted to get a second opinion before I moved on. Here's his link: Major Markus Brown

He's kinda a good guy in the beginning, but my protag joins a rebellion and Markus becomes an antagonist
Let me know if u have any questions lol 😂