forum Critique My Character
Started by barabara
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@WriteOutofTime

I…I can't find anything wrong with her character. She's so amazing. Um…maybe add more backstory? I. I don't know. I'm usually way better at critiquing characters but I genuinely think this character doesn't need much work. Her flaws and personality match well with each other, her motivations are great, her mannerisms are cool. It seriously seems like you're describing a real person. Great job!