I really need some help with my main character! I am writing a story which I might be publishing and I really need help with the character development. Anyone who would care to share their thoughts on my character I will be forever grateful. Thank you and have a wonderful night/day!!!!
Here's the link for her Armenia Sheryn
Hi! I like her a lot, especially how she died and has to fight to come back to life. A few things I noticed though– She's super underweight for her height, she should probably be at least 140 pounds. Also, I kinda hate to say it, but everyone has prejudices. It can be anywhere from hating cats to hating people of a lower class, but without a prejudice characters lose some depth. I hope I wasn't too harsh, and I hope I helped.
Thak you so much! I didn't add any prejudices because I didn't really know which to put but I'll think of some. I'll also be working one her weight. Thank you so much for the help!
Anytime