forum Critique My Character?

Started April 18, 2019 by Opal in a Cave

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Thank you! (I don't know if it says this or not by SOMA stands for Sisterhood of Magic & Anomalies)

Your character seems really well put together! One thing I would suggest is adding parts to her favourite foods and possessions. Having an explanation as to why her favourite things mean so much to her will help develop her a little bit more. Otherwise, I think you have a great character!

I really like it, maybe try to put more things into full sentences

a few points:

1. ad to the flaws how they affect how she interacts with the world around her. otherwise, it could be interpreted many different ways and might not even be a flaw. Even "regularly kills people" might be considered positive depending on how it is written into the story.
2. Why does she assume everyone hates her?
3. "As kind as she knows how to the animals she studies" <- What do you mean with this sentence in personality type. (nitpick, not important, just curious)
4. What is a genetic therapist? If it involves interacting with and helping people I'm not sure how that works with her personality.
5. " Addition, subtraction, multiplication, and division" <- so, basic calculus?

Overall she seems to be a reasonably well-made character.