forum critique my character

Started June 24, 2018 by @captain-universe

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here's my character that i've worked the most on

feel free to check out the world too!

first of all, i love that name it's so cool?? don't see too many estelles on here lmao, but the body type should be a bit more specific about what body type she has. under mannerisms those are good, but you should consider also adding physical mannerisms (like fidgeting with her fingers when she's nervous or something like that). you could always add more flaws, but the ones you have are really good. i really like all of the favourites! The only thing left is just adding a background, this is super important for the character because it shows how they got to were they are and who they are. i get it if you don't want to because of spoilers, but you can add it in the private notes section (nobody will see it but it will be good to have a reference to it!!). she seems like a super interesting character, i'm probably going to check out your universe too haha

Thank you so much @"Raziel Gallephraya" I didn't even see the background section!